Lesson 18

 

And Im Jenny Silver.

Welcome to Business English for Global Competence.

 

Yes. Let's learn how to communicate effectively in business.

 

Let's learn how to write emails in English together.

 

So, let's get started.

 

Okay! Let's take a look at Takashi's email.

 

 

In addition to providing reasons for hiring, Takashi should also acknowledge and express gratitude for Michael's role and include him in the decision-making process.

 

I think it would be easier to understand if Takashi mentions some specifics on how things will be split.

 

 

Okay! Let's take a look at the Rewritten Email.

 

 

Now, let's take a look at Michael's Reply.

 

Well, a new hire in America could mean just about anything. It's fairly common to change jobs throughout one's career. So, they could be any age. Even new college graduates are expected to have some work experience before starting a job, especially internships where they learn the basics.

 

 

See you next time. Bye!